Glow after Dark

I had to shoot a WOW shot to a layout Ad in my Advanced camera class using that big ole 4X5 camera (medium format). As you can tell, I'm not a big fan of the camera at all, but here is my final layout.

BTW, just incase you are wondering the Ad read "WoW, our product stands alone". I replaced the latter clause with my signature to place it on the web. I hope it's really a WOW IMAGE, and as always your feedback is greatly appreciated.

~Smooches~